Direct Dialogue And The Two Brothers

In writing we have been learning to write direct dialogue so that it can increase our writing skills.

Here is an example of dialogue that I created for the silent movie “Ruckus”. “Ruckus” was about two brothers that were fighting over a gem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Once there was to brothers named jeff and Jeffy

“Who’s going to get the gem. “Jeffy moaned.

“that’s my gem” Jeffy exclaimed.

“No that’s my gem” jeff shouted.

The verbs are in a different colour because we had to choose interesting verbs to make it more interesting.

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